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Discussion in 'Alcohol' started by crc3thebest, Oct 7, 2015.

  1. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    The tears from my eyes won't come out
    I yearn for you
    Why must I regret
    Please remember how we first met
    Oh the insolence of me
    How could it be
    Only then we can see
    Again the tears from my eyes won't come out
    I yearn for you
    Why must I regret
    Oh please remember the day we first met
    Your intrusive hugs
    Your blind kisses
    Makes every part of my being glisten
    The coldness of your painful love
    That turned my heart into a black dove
    Oh how far far from above
    Does my countenance run
    why must I regret
    The day we met
    When I new it would
    Promote an incident
    You have taken my everything
    Hung it on a tree
    Destined for all to see
    Knowingly stating my embarrassment
    For then you come to show your support
    Just when all has left me
    No hand out to pick me up
    But to leave me where
    You guided me
    I know now your intention
    Love can only be both ways
    Substances promote a dream
    I know how it can be
    Though the pain is makes it hard to breathe
    I cannot believe you used my insolence
    To take everything
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  2. L_B

    L_B Community Champion

    Another beautiful and touching piece of work. Your words just flow so naturally. I can feel your every emotion through each work. Thanks gain for sharing. These poems are helping so many people!
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  3. Tsky45

    Tsky45 Community Champion

    Nice poem it's really moving. This is probably the healthiest way to express yourself when feeling down about something. I wonder what inspired this. Thanks for sharing.
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  4. dyanmarie25

    dyanmarie25 Community Champion

    As expected, you have once again able to create such a moving poem. I love the rawness of this piece of literature. Thanks for sharing! All the best. :)
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  5. dechantajones

    dechantajones Active Contributor

    I love this! It's wonderful how well you express your struggle with addiction through poetry. You are very intelligent and have great insight!
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  6. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    Thanks for your input!
  7. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    Thanks for commenting!
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