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"Who Am I"

Discussion in 'Share Your Story Here' started by crc3thebest, Jul 30, 2015.

  1. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    Who Am I
    AM I Flesh Or Spirit?
    Who am I!
    Even When I Die
    Who am I?

    I am a tree
    Planted By God
    His Seed Lies in Me
    With Him I Can Do All Things
    Though I am no greater than
    Any Other Human Being

    So Who Am I?
    I Am A King
    So Are You, You are Me
    We are all Kings and Queens
    Destined to be in that great Light Jesus Christ Sees

    Some Even Tend To Believe
    When Our Lives Are Over
    We Are Not Destined To Be
    Don't Let that Tip Over Your Tree
    Can You Not See
    God Created You and Me

    Why Not Seek Him
    Are Our Lives Too Brim
    We try to live life to the fullest
    Not knowing that are relationship
    With God should Be Our Main Purpose

    So Who Are We?
    Are We Fools?
    Dumbfounded Laid Up
    And Manipulated As Tools?

    Do we Look At Life And Smile
    Holding That Burden Of Denial
    Do We Get Caught Up In Depression
    From Thoughts Of Adolescents?

    When Do We Take Charge?
    When Do We Want A Relationship With God?
    Do We Wait Till Life Takes Its Effects
    Leaving Us Torn Apart And Hopeless?

    Oh When That Day Comes
    Bitter As A Sip Of Rum
    Who Are You, Who Are We, Who am I?
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  2. MyDigitalpoint

    MyDigitalpoint Community Champion

    I'm thankful to have found this inspiring poem buried here, and probably going ignored because it was posted in the wrong category, but in the right pathway for self-understanding.

    Thanks for posting it :)
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  3. dyanmarie25

    dyanmarie25 Community Champion

    Is that your original work/poem? It's totally such a wonderful and very inspiring piece of literature. I feel so empowered and motivated now. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
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  4. L_B

    L_B Community Champion

    This is a very inspiring piece of work. Thank you for taking the time to share this with us. It will serve as motivation to so many people on here! I, too, am thankful that I came across this post!
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  5. whitenoise

    whitenoise Senior Contributor

    I am glad I've found this masterpiece. I'm surprised that none wrote something though. I find it really inspirating and even well written with good metrics. The meaning is really deep, good job!
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  6. harold

    harold Community Champion

    What a wonderful poem! The poem is great. Wonderful writing skills and the right inspiration for all of us. The poem takes us down the road of self discovery, bringing out the essence of man--of human beings in general, demonstrating the valor of a human being and at the same time challenging each and everyone to look down into his or herself and take an action. The poem is asking all the important questions of life, linking them to the creator--the all mighty God. We are all regarded as kings and queens. Congratulation for this great peace. Thanks for taking the time to write something as wonderful and inspiring as this poem. Keep it up.
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  7. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

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  8. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    I am glad you feel empowered! Thank you for your support!
  9. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    Thanks for your kind words! I look forward to posting similar material.
  10. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    I am glad you were able to relate to the poem. Thank you for your support!
  11. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    Thanks for your support! I am glad you were able to receive the message of the poem.
  12. crc3thebest

    crc3thebest Community Champion

    Thank you for your support! I am glad you were able to enjoy the poem and receive the message.